One of the key issues that I must work on are grammatical. Spelling errors and comma errors appear in both my heart of darkness and Hamlet essays. Also within both essays I need to keep quality consistent and provide good examples throughout the essay. I tend to under develop some ideas while developing others quite well. I tend to cut my analysis short in many places and in my HOD essay I could have delved much deeper into Freudian analysis of WWII and of HOD and trying to relate the two.
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